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    Furyan9x

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    Just registered here, want to post my first champion concept. :)

    Post by Furyan9x on Sat Mar 16, 2013 8:56 am

    Welcome to my concept of
    Irusan, The Larian Savior





    This is my first attempt at this... so please let me know things that are missing or things that I can improve upon.



    Hi guys, i've been working on this for about a month now.. and I think I have finally perfected it. My only regret is that I don't have physical artistic ability, because I am unable to draw the concept of this champion that I have in my head. It's a mixture, bare with me here, between Craig Marduk from Tekken, Hell Boy, and the male Draenei from WoW. I will try to describe him in as much detail as I possibly can to provide a mental image for what he should look like. I have thought up his lore, his kit, and even his emotes/sayings.

    ****ATTENTION****
    IF SOMEONE WITH ARTISTIC ABILITY WANTS TO ATTEMPT TO CONSTRUCT A DRAFT OF THIS CHAMPION, I WOULD GREATLY APPRECIATE IT. If you are interested post here, I can give you any details you will need.


    Brief description:

    Spoiler:
    Ulkar Irusan is part of an ancient civilization, that is unknown to many Valoranians to have actually ever existed. It is merely a legend, a folk tale that people tell as bedtime stories, or around campfires. Irusan is a wise and noble ruler of the Larians, who takes on an almost impossible to overcome obstacle for the sake of his race. In doing so, Irusan undergoes changes. Changes to his way of living, his morales, and his character. The story below tells of what became of Irusan, and I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed making it.

    I'll start with his Lore.

    Spoiler:
    Among the many ancient civilizations of Valoran that have been long forgotten, there exists a place once known as Laria. Now merely a tall tale, the story of how Laria was decimated by one of many Rune Wars that took place during the immature years of magical warfare is still worthy of hearing. Albeit a dark and troubling tale, it is not without a hero. Larians did not age as humans do. The life span of a human is equivalent to the infancy of a Larian. This allowed Laria to grow to be a peaceful civilization. It wasn't large, and consisted of only a few hundred people, but their culture was rich and their values wholesome. War was frowned upon by the Larians, for to them it solved nothing. In the eyes of the Larians, conflicts were not to be solved by warfare, but by understanding eachother's perspectives, communicating, and compromising.

    During a Rune War between 2 feuding tribes of Valoran, Laria found itself trapped in the middle of chaos and destruction, with no way of protecting itself. Larians possessed no army, no fortifications, no weapons, nothing that promoted violence. They prayed to their sacred deities for safety and protection, and that had worked for them for centuries. Among the Larian people, there was a man named Irusan. Irusan was the stepson of Ulkar(King in Larian) Trayon, who had adopted Irusan at a young age, when his parents contracted a fatal illness. Irusan being Trayon's only son left him next in line to take the throne of Laria. The Larians were greatly pleased by this, because they could think of no man better suited for the job.

    When the Larians realized they were to be caught in the middle of a devastating battle, they became very nervous and afraid. During this time of uncertainty, the Larian people looked to Irusan for guidance. Irusan had no experience with dealing with battles, nor did any of the Larians; They had avoided confrontation since the beginning of their existence. The only useful techniques they posessed were healing magicks, granted by their sacred deities. Irusan had only one choice: to fight. Irusan dedicated his life to protecting and serving his people, and he would not fail to accomplish that. When Irusan received word that armies were drawing nearer to Laria, he prayed to the deities to give him the strength, the courage, and the knowledge to prepare for what was to come. Irusan began training an elite force of Larians known today as "The Dakari".[Duh-Car-Eye] (Protectors, in Larian) These members were carefully chosen by Irusan out of about 100 who volunteered to fight. Irusan contacted sister clans near Laria and pleaded with them to forge weapons for The Dakari. The sister clans insisted that Irusan let them aid him in battle, but he did not waht to risk having their blood on his hands. He insisted that any weapons would do, the quality did not matter, only that his elite force possessed weapons with which to defend their home. Irusan began vigorous training of The Dakari, preparing them to defend Laria from any and all who would force harm to befall it.

    As the sounds of marching troops and chanting magicians got louder, The Dakari grew stronger. Developing tactics and strategies to withstand assaults of armies 5 times their size. Since The Dakari only consisted of 40 combatants, they had to train smart.. very smart. Upon the arrival of the warring tribes, Irusan and The Dakari prepared to do whatever they had to to defend Laria.

    On the eve of battle, Irusan nearly completely evacuated Laria, sending his people to wait out the war near their sister clans. Irusan wanted to protect as many of his people as he could, so in the event of Laria being destroyed they would be able to rebuild and start over. Irusan and The Dakari waited silently in the center of Laria, waiting for the armies to attempt to cross to get to eachother. Once battle began, Irusan and The Dakari faught valiantly. Hordes and hordes of enemies spilled into Laria, only to be quickly dispatched by the intelligent and effective tactics of The Dakari. With the aid of their healing magicks, The Dakari were able to withstand many hours of battle. However, the might of the warring armies proved too much for Irusan and The Dakari, and the majority of the group fell in battle.

    With Laria almost completely destroyed, Irusan gave up, dropping to his knees in dismay and feelings of failure and disappointment in himself. Welcoming death, Irusan waited calmly for the blade of a soldier or the spell of a magician to finish him off. Before he could be slaughtered, he heard the loud latch of shackles on his wrists. Irusan was taken prisoner along with 2 of The Dakari. As prisoners, they were forced to work for their captors, who sought to take advantage of their long lives by forcing them to kill, do manual labor, and anything else they could think of. Upon the forming of the League of Legends, Irusan and his Dakari were forced to do the bidding of their captors in the League's arenas. With the promise of returning to their people upon completion of their captors wishes, Irusan and his 2 Dakari soldiers did as they were told, and fought.


    ( I know it is very long. I had trouble making it simple because there's a lot of information I wanted to include to provide depth. If it's even looked at by devs and considered, im sure they could simplify it.)


    Now, an explanation of his appearance.


    Spoiler:
    Ok so for his basic appearance his is Tall, dark blue with a tail, beefy. Really muscular sort of like Augmented Singed(build)x Unchained Allistar(color). he has some battle scars on his face and arm from years of doing the bidding of his captors. Although he has healing abilities, it's not advanced enough to make scars go away. His gear/armor is similar to Deadnaught nasus, he has a little bit of Conan the Barbarian like armor. His weapons are on one arm his whole arm is a large stone sleeve that fits like a glove, he uses it to do hulklike things. On his other hand is something similar, but it's only the fist not an entire sleeve. I really wish i could provide a picture because since you dont have an image to go on everyone will imagine different things and thats not what I want :S but oh well.

    Inspiration drawn from Craid Marduk is his size, his build, and his menacing look.
    Image - http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/4244/craigmarduktekken5pictu.jpg
    As you can see he's rather large, and very muscular.

    Inspiration drawn from Hellboy is the stone arm. Similar, yet different, Irusan's weapons consist of a Stone Sleeve on his right arm, and a Stone Fist on his left hand.
    Image - http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/7184/500fullm.jpg

    Inspiration drawn from Male Draenei race is the color, and the alien-like characteristics.
    Image - http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3840/draeneimalehaircut.jpg

    Now his kit.

    Spoiler:
    Im imagining him as a tanky bruiser/jungler. (of course, right?)

    Uses Mana.

    (Following numbers all subject to change)

    Stats:
    Health: 455 (+65)
    Health regen: 5 (+0.8 )
    Mana: 255 (+50)
    Mana regen: 2.0(+0.7)
    Range: 150
    Attack damage: 58(+2.5)
    Attack speed: 0.635 (+2.5%)
    Armor: 25 (+3.5)
    Magic res.: 35 (+0.75)
    Mov. speed: 330



    Passive: Larian Wisdom
    Irusan is granted lifesteal (increasing every third level by a percentage [3%/5%/7%/9%/11%/12% capping at level 16] on targets affected by his Mark of The Dakari.

    Q: Mark of The Dakari Cooldown: 10/9/8/7/6
    Irusan pummels his target with his Gauntlet of Protection, dealing (75/105/135/165/195)Base attack damage + (0.6)AD Scaling and applies the Mark of The Dakari on the target.

    While Mark of The Dakari is on the target, Irusan gains (His passive) lifesteal depending on his current level. Mark lasts 6 seconds.

    W: Keeper of Peace Cooldown: 30/26/22/18/14
    Irusan passively gains (5/10/15/20/25)Armor and (3/6/9/12/15)MR each time he takes damage below 25% of his health. (stacking up to 3 times.)
    When activated, Irusan consumes his applied Marks of The Dakari on enemy champions to grant the next incoming attack or ability from that/those champion(s) to heal him for (30/40/50/60/70).

    E: Ulkar's Ruling Cooldown: 21/18/15/12/9
    Irusan punches the ground, dealing area of effect damage in a small area around him(think Volibear's slow shout thing.) Slowing enemies(percentage based on range[the closer you are to the outside, the more you are slowed] If an enemy is affected by Mark of The Dakari, they are stunned for 1 second and the mark is consumed. If you consume the mark with Ulkar's Ruling, you will not get the effect form Keeper of Peace.

    R: Defenders of Laria Cooldown: 130s/105s/80s
    Irusan calls to the last 2 remaining Dakari for assistance in battle. For (10s/14s/18s)time. These 2 Dakari soldiers will fight with Irusan in battle, dealing (30%/40%/50%) of Irusans AD based on level. When one of the soldiers is killed, Irusan is healed for (75/135/195). If both soldiers are killed within 5 seconds of use, all of Irusans ability cooldowns are reset (except his ultimate),

    These summons will be similar to shaco clones, deal less damage, take more damage. They will be tanky if Irusan is tanky, but not to the same extent. And they will be strong if Irusan is strong, but again not to the same extent.


    Emotes/Sayings:

    Spoiler:
    ctrl+1 Irusan points to the sky, puts his hands together and murmurs a Larian prayer. After completing the prayer, he kisses his fingers (as when crossing your heart, Forehead, chest, shoulder, shoulder, kiss)

    ctrl+2 Irusan Shouts "I am Irusan of Laria! The greatest fighter in history! and in the middle of saying history he starts coughing like he caught a hairball, and sighs and says.. "almost"

    ctrl+3 his dance can be similar to any dance of an indian tribe or something cultural.

    ctrl+4 a hearty laugh, yet slightly faked like he is forcing himself to laugh.

    Saying when chosen for champ select : Either "Laria will Remain" "I will return to Laria..."
    Thats my champion guys. Tell me what you think.
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    MynxTheOrigin

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    Post by MynxTheOrigin on Sun Mar 17, 2013 2:32 pm

    I got couple things to say. It really looks like you took a lot of time to work on his lore. I really like that.

    About his passive. The effect is kinda... useless. It could just be applied to his Q to apply synergy. You could make something like, and this is off the top of my head so you can disregard it...

    Passive: Larian Peace
    Irusan's inner peace and memories of Laria give him the drive to go on, gradually increasing his stats (or maybe just AD or something) by .1/.15/.2 every second out of combat while out of combat.

    The effect could also have a hard cap or be consumed on first basic attack.

    But otherwise, you seem to have really good potential.

    Furyan9x

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    Post by Furyan9x on Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:25 am

    MynxTheOrigin wrote:I got couple things to say. It really looks like you took a lot of time to work on his lore. I really like that.

    About his passive. The effect is kinda... useless. It could just be applied to his Q to apply synergy. You could make something like, and this is off the top of my head so you can disregard it...

    Passive: Larian Peace
    Irusan's inner peace and memories of Laria give him the drive to go on, gradually increasing his stats (or maybe just AD or something) by .1/.15/.2 every second out of combat while out of combat.

    The effect could also have a hard cap or be consumed on first basic attack.

    But otherwise, you seem to have really good potential.

    Thanks Very Happy I have thought up a bunch of champions that I will be posting here and on the League forums in the coming weeks, I just wanted to post my first one to see what people think.

    I also noticed that his passive was a bit.. lackluster. My initial thought was to have it grant base lifesteal, akin to Nasus passive, and have it doubled when attacking targets affected by the Mark.
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    MynxTheOrigin

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    Post by MynxTheOrigin on Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:27 am

    That sounds applicable, but still serves synergy with just his mark. Think of something that accentuates the whole kit, or most of it.
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    MynxTheOrigin

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    Post by MynxTheOrigin on Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:28 am

    And post away!

    Furyan9x

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    Post by Furyan9x on Mon Mar 18, 2013 6:54 am

    Yea I see what you mean. I'll think of something Very Happy

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    Bliztron

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    Post by Bliztron on Sat Apr 13, 2013 6:46 am

    This is really well organized and formatted. You have my respect.

    I noticed one really big thing I need to point out: his passive and his W. His passive right now not only restricts his gameplay and makes him have no passive without his Q ability, but he also gains worse of an effect from it than Nasus gains naturally. Also, his W is really pointless and useless without his W, amking it very problematic. I suggest you change the effects and maybe instead make it have bonus effects on Marked enemies. Or, to simplify this all, I suggest this following change, which might make the whole kit more synergized and interesting: Move the Mark of Dakari to his passive. make it so like every so many hits you apply a stack or make it so every hit applies a stack and something. You can even make it so that each hit applies a stacking mark which reduces thier armor or vision or something, and then all of your abilities could COMBO with the mark. Keep in mind that they should never be reliant on it, but it should make them better when the Mark is applied. Plus it is on your passive so everything is much better situated and synergized.


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