Kira, Queen of Fire

First and foremost, I believe that the fire mage trope is a bit overused, you'd have to twist it a bit to make it truly interesting (look up Kyriel in the LoL forum for one possible option). This one basically is Brand 2.0, same idea, different mechanics. Onto the actual kit, please take note I didn't exhaustively think about it, it's simply my first sight reactions.CosmicChezze wrote:Kira is a fire mage. Most of her attacks will be AOE and have DOT's. My idea for her backstory is that she was picked up on the streets by a master Magician and he taught her his trade. Here is an example of her abilities. She is going to be a melee ranged. She may also be viable as a jungler.

~~ Backstory is, afaik, a first. However, you'd have to put a twist in there or it'd be very bland...

(Q): Burst of Fire. Activated
Kira cannot control the fire in her body and it shoots out into nearby enemies.

~~ That's pretty nice, nothing to say here. It however lacks details... Would it be like Amumu's tantrum (centered AoE), or Heimer's missiles (limited amount of shots)

(W): Fireball. Activated
Kira shoots a ball of fire at an are dealing initial damage and Giving anything in the radius a Blaze dot in the area.

~~ A simple skillshot+AoE spell, uses the passive. Nothing great, nothing bad.

(E): Trail of Flames. Activated
Kira shoots across the ground leaving fire in her wake and giving an Blaze Dot to anything who touches that line. The target also gets a Blaze Dot

~~ so you dash to someone? or what is it? Also, if it is a DoT-centered mage, giving an escape may be overkill.

(R) Overload. Activated
Kira gives all enemy players a Blaze Dot and you may activate it again to deal all damage that would be dealt by Blaze Dots on enemy players at once.

~~ Massive expunge, this is to be used mid-fight so you can re-apply DoTs. Interesting.

(Passive) Kira gets __ Attack Speed and __ AP for each Blaze dot she has on enemy players

~~ This conflicts with Ult, greatly. may wanna revisit