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    Just registered here, want to post my first champion concept. :)

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    Furyan9x


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    Post by Furyan9x Sat Mar 16, 2013 8:56 am

    Welcome to my concept of
    Irusan, The Larian Savior





    This is my first attempt at this... so please let me know things that are missing or things that I can improve upon.



    Hi guys, i've been working on this for about a month now.. and I think I have finally perfected it. My only regret is that I don't have physical artistic ability, because I am unable to draw the concept of this champion that I have in my head. It's a mixture, bare with me here, between Craig Marduk from Tekken, Hell Boy, and the male Draenei from WoW. I will try to describe him in as much detail as I possibly can to provide a mental image for what he should look like. I have thought up his lore, his kit, and even his emotes/sayings.

    ****ATTENTION****
    IF SOMEONE WITH ARTISTIC ABILITY WANTS TO ATTEMPT TO CONSTRUCT A DRAFT OF THIS CHAMPION, I WOULD GREATLY APPRECIATE IT. If you are interested post here, I can give you any details you will need.


    Brief description:

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    I'll start with his Lore.

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    Now, an explanation of his appearance.


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    Now his kit.

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    Emotes/Sayings:

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    Thats my champion guys. Tell me what you think.
    MynxTheOrigin
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    Post by MynxTheOrigin Sun Mar 17, 2013 2:32 pm

    I got couple things to say. It really looks like you took a lot of time to work on his lore. I really like that.

    About his passive. The effect is kinda... useless. It could just be applied to his Q to apply synergy. You could make something like, and this is off the top of my head so you can disregard it...

    Passive: Larian Peace
    Irusan's inner peace and memories of Laria give him the drive to go on, gradually increasing his stats (or maybe just AD or something) by .1/.15/.2 every second out of combat while out of combat.

    The effect could also have a hard cap or be consumed on first basic attack.

    But otherwise, you seem to have really good potential.
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    Post by Furyan9x Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:25 am

    MynxTheOrigin wrote:I got couple things to say. It really looks like you took a lot of time to work on his lore. I really like that.

    About his passive. The effect is kinda... useless. It could just be applied to his Q to apply synergy. You could make something like, and this is off the top of my head so you can disregard it...

    Passive: Larian Peace
    Irusan's inner peace and memories of Laria give him the drive to go on, gradually increasing his stats (or maybe just AD or something) by .1/.15/.2 every second out of combat while out of combat.

    The effect could also have a hard cap or be consumed on first basic attack.

    But otherwise, you seem to have really good potential.

    Thanks Very Happy I have thought up a bunch of champions that I will be posting here and on the League forums in the coming weeks, I just wanted to post my first one to see what people think.

    I also noticed that his passive was a bit.. lackluster. My initial thought was to have it grant base lifesteal, akin to Nasus passive, and have it doubled when attacking targets affected by the Mark.
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    Post by MynxTheOrigin Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:27 am

    That sounds applicable, but still serves synergy with just his mark. Think of something that accentuates the whole kit, or most of it.
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    Post by MynxTheOrigin Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:28 am

    And post away!
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    Post by Furyan9x Mon Mar 18, 2013 6:54 am

    Yea I see what you mean. I'll think of something Very Happy

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    Post by Bliztron Sat Apr 13, 2013 6:46 am

    This is really well organized and formatted. You have my respect.

    I noticed one really big thing I need to point out: his passive and his W. His passive right now not only restricts his gameplay and makes him have no passive without his Q ability, but he also gains worse of an effect from it than Nasus gains naturally. Also, his W is really pointless and useless without his W, amking it very problematic. I suggest you change the effects and maybe instead make it have bonus effects on Marked enemies. Or, to simplify this all, I suggest this following change, which might make the whole kit more synergized and interesting: Move the Mark of Dakari to his passive. make it so like every so many hits you apply a stack or make it so every hit applies a stack and something. You can even make it so that each hit applies a stacking mark which reduces thier armor or vision or something, and then all of your abilities could COMBO with the mark. Keep in mind that they should never be reliant on it, but it should make them better when the Mark is applied. Plus it is on your passive so everything is much better situated and synergized.

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